This site gives published English-language haiku, senryu and haibun, with news of the Central Valley Haiku Club (CVHC). For membership or other questions, contact CVHC President Yvonne Cabalona.
Monday, April 07, 2008
horseshoes
day moon a pitched horseshoe leans against the stake
3 comments:
Nice haiku. Is "pitched"
redundant?
Yes. I really like this one. And yes. "pitched" is redundant; it works even better without it.
Thanks Mark. Yeah, it does read better without "pitched."
Bill
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