Monday, April 07, 2008

horseshoes

day moon a pitched horseshoe leans against the stake

w. f. owen

3 comments:

Bill said...

Nice haiku. Is "pitched"
redundant?

Mark Hollingsworth said...

Yes. I really like this one. And yes. "pitched" is redundant; it works even better without it.

w. f. owen said...

Thanks Mark. Yeah, it does read better without "pitched."

Bill