This site gives published English-language haiku, senryu and haibun, with news of the Central Valley Haiku Club (CVHC). For membership or other questions, contact CVHC President Yvonne Cabalona.
Nice haiku. Is "pitched"redundant?
Yes. I really like this one. And yes. "pitched" is redundant; it works even better without it.
Thanks Mark. Yeah, it does read better without "pitched."Bill
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